Thursday, February 27, 2014

Crane!

So, I've been thinking a little of overhauling and restarting Crane! I have a new story idea that is way more doable, plus more interesting, and I've given some characters some tweaking to make them better. The Unholies now have a more plausible creation story, and Crane is now 50% more adorable. Oh, and she has a mom now. Her mom may or may not be important....

I've been working on writing the script/redesigning characters thus far, so I just thought I'd give you a little taste of some of my favorite quotes thus far(in no particular order):

Crisis: She's nothing. No one. Nobody important. And if she were, it would be none of your business.
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Crane: Hate is like cutting off your own hand and expecting it to hurt the other person; it does them no harm and you no good.
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Pilot: I can't believe he still doesn't trust me!
Panic: Well, to be honest, I don't think I'd trust you with my kids either.
Pilot:....What if they were my kids too?
Panic: I'm not sure I like what you're implying there.
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Mannequin: Look, darling, the people adore us!
Pythagoras: It’s because you’re so adorable, my dear. (waving)
Mannequin: (waving as well at a cheering crowd as they enter a castle-like building) Aren’t they wonderful? (As the door shuts) I want to rip their little throats out. (Her face changes from charmingly fake to disgusted.)
Pythagoras: Someday, my dear. Someday.
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The end...? Or is it? I might post some more tidbits soon!

Love and sparkles,
Kayla

2 comments:

  1. Hahaha! I love the conversation between Pythagorus and Mannequin, it's perfect... perfectly evil, I mean. Can I just say I'M SO EXCITED!!! I'M SO EXCITED!!! *flails and falls off of chair* You know I've been a fan of Crane for forever, right? Also, to answer your question on my blog, yes, I'm quitting Savers. And Craaaaane~ :D

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    1. I think you'll enjoy some of the changes I've made! Now with 50% more Pilot! Because....I freaking love him. I will be posting some more tidbits later, so stay tuned!

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